
He said my name through the locked door, flat and bored, and the worst part was I had never told a single person at that carnival what I was called. Almost bored. How did he know it? My name is not on any carnival lanyard or posted rota, and I was twenty-four, working the Vanthorpe Ferris wheel alon
Chapters:
0:00 The Wheel Watcher
1:45 The Wheel Watcher
3:26 The Wheel Watcher
5:09 Something in the Mirror
6:50 The Guard Shrugs
8:09 The Layout
9:45 The List
11:23 What They Took
Written and narrated by Alice Kettleby.
Original fiction — names, places and events are invented.
He said my name through the locked door, flat and bored, and the worst part was I had never told a single person at that carnival what I was called. Almost bored. How did he know it? My name is not on any carnival lanyard or posted rota, and I was twenty-four, working the Vanthorpe Ferris wheel alone until the last bus at twelve-twenty.
Whatever was standing on those steps had learned it some other way, and that is the part that still wakes me up. Gus never checked on me once. In the first hour a man in a long grey coat and wide-brimmed hat bought three single tickets and never once boarded. His shoes were wrong, stiff black dress shoes caked in dry mud.
He held each ticket stub in a tight fist rather than pocketing them. That was the first thing. Second night he was back, standing at the exit gate, watching each rider climb off, one by one. I walked over to Gus and told him about the man. Gus just wiped his hands on a rag and said he was probably waiting for someone.
I almost believed that. On the third night I found a laminated card wedged into my control panel. Just a phone number, no name. I told myself it fell from someone's bag. I pocketed it. Later at home I noticed the number had my exact area code. I did not sleep well that night. Night four.
A girl of about eight came up to me crying, said her dad was the tall man in the hat and she could not find him. So I left the controls unmanned and walked her toward the information tent. I knew I should not have moved from my post. I knew it. When I turned around the girl was gone.
The grey-coat man was standing inside my control booth with one gloved hand resting on the lever. I ran back and he was gone by the time I got there. The carnival CCTV caught the booth perfectly. Just cut off his face entirely. Gus finally came over properly. He walked up to the man and said something low and firm.
The man left without a word, no argument, no look back. My colleague Priya made two cups of tea and I laughed about it. I genuinely thought the worst was already behind me. At eleven forty-seven I heard a low rhythmic knock from under the motor housing. Distant. Like a loose bolt.
At eleven fifty-eight it was on the steps of my booth. At twelve-oh-nine the handle of the locked inner door turned. Then, through the thin wall, he said my name. Flat. Almost bored. I called my flatmate, kept the line open, and said loudly that the site manager was on his way over right now.
The knocking stopped. I ran to the east gate and grabbed a passing security guard. We went back together. The booth was empty. The laminated card was gone. I finished my two weeks at the east gate booth and never returned to the wheel. Police found no match for that number. On my last morning, a ticket stub sat inside my zipped bag.
One adult ride. Dated that night. The wheel had been locked since midnight. Have you ever called out in the dark and had something answer back using your friend's name, but you knew instantly it was not your friend? That sound has kept me out of every funhouse since I was nineteen.
My name is Owen. And it started at a summer fair. Owen here. I was nineteen. My mate Callum's birthday, a Friday in July. We paid twelve pounds each to get into the Meridian Summer Fair. The funhouse was a converted shipping container maze, angled mirrors everywhere, LED strips on the floor, one exit at the far end marked with a green light.
Inside there was a figure in a full-body reflective silver costume, standing completely still in a side corridor. I assumed it was a performer. Then I noticed the costume had no seams I could see. And its head turned to track me as I passed, with no sound at all. I lost Callum at the first junction.
I called out and heard his voice answer from two directions at once. One of the voices used my full name. Owenleigh. Callum has never once called me that. It is not on any ticket or wristband. There was no way it could know that name. I followed the voice that sounded more like Callum, deeper into the maze.
A soft tapping started behind me, like a knuckle on glass, three mirrors back. It stayed exactly three mirrors back. The staff member at the entrance had told us the only rule was do not touch the mirrors. I pulled out my phone and started recording. The footage has my breathing, then Callum's voice somewhere ahead.
And then a third voice in the background, flat and toneless, counting down from ten. Neither of us was counting. I watched that footage four times before I caught it. I kept moving, following the green light, certain I was almost out. What I did not know was that the tapping behind me had stopped.
The silver figure was no longer three panels back. It made no sound at all now, and sound was the only way I had tracked it. Owen shoved through the exit door and there was Callum, already outside, eating a hot dog and laughing at a clown act nearby. They agreed it was just a brilliant scare.
Owen pocketed his phone, still shaking a little, but laughing too. That was the mistake. Back at Owen's car at 10:34, Callum asked who the person in the back seat was. Owen turned. The seat was empty. But the rear window had a single handprint in condensation, pressed from inside, fingers pointing straight down.
Nobody had been in that car. Security checked the car, shrugged, said kids press hands on windows all the time. Owen asked Callum to describe the mirror-costume figure from inside the funhouse. Callum stared at him. He said he never saw anyone in a mirror costume. Not once the whole time.
Owen played the phone footage one more time. Audio of his own breathing, then that flat voice counting down from ten. And in the last frame, reflected in the furthest mirror of the maze, there is a face. Almost but not quite his own. It is smiling. What would you do if you found out the carnival behind your office had gone missing from three other towns before yours, and nobody had warned the fourth?
That question changed everything for me. My name is Denise. Let me start at the beginning. I was 38 and worked as a local events liaison officer for Claremont Borough Council. The Hartwell Travelling Fair filed correct paperwork, paid a forty-pound fee by bank transfer. I approved it without a site visit.
I had thirty-two other files open that week. Thirty-two. Day three, 7pm, I drove out for a routine compliance check. Stalls along the outer fence, a carousel centre, fortune-teller tent at the north end, staff caravans at the south gate. And one unmarked white caravan, set apart behind orange cones.
I wrote that down. The site manager, Mr Parr, met me at the gate. Calm, measured sentences, a precise kind of politeness. He offered me a sealed water bottle from a cool-box. I took it before I noticed: none of the other staff ever touched a single thing from that box. The permit pinned to the gate post had my signature but the wrong year.
Last October, not this one. When I pointed it out, Mr Parr already had a corrected copy in his hand before I finished the sentence. He had been ready for that question. I called my manager. He told me not to make a scene over a date typo, finish the check and go home. I almost obeyed.
But I had not opened the water bottle yet, and when I looked closely the seal was already broken. Already. Mr Parr invited me to inspect the white caravan, mentioning a staff member's medical equipment inside. He asked me, very politely, to please be discreet. My job requires inspecting every structure on site.
I went in. I could tell the request was designed to make refusal feel cruel. No medical equipment. Empty shelving, one folding table. On the table, a printed list of ten names with dates and council districts beside each. My full name was seventh. Tonight's date beside it. The word in the final column was not a job title I recognised.
I photographed the list. Outside, the carousel started, a low mechanical whirr I had not heard before. Then the same sound, closer, behind the caravans. Then it was right outside the door. I stood very still and did not look at the window behind me. At 8:51 the caravan door opened.
The exterior light had gone out. Mr Parr's voice, still measured, still calm. He said I could keep the photograph if I liked. Then he said they would be making a copy of me as well. I ran. Eleven percent battery. I called the non-emergency police line, walking fast toward the public entrance, and spoke loudly about a gas leak at the postcode.
That postcode is a code my husband and I use. It means come now. The line dropped before I could say more. Two officers attended. Mr Parr was cooperative. The caravan was empty, the table wiped. But one officer pulled me aside and said quietly that the Hartwell Travelling Fair's company number belonged to a business dissolved four years ago.
She told me to call our legal team first thing. The council revoked the permit. The fair packed up overnight and was gone by 5am. Investigators found every other name on that list was a compliance officer from three neighbouring boroughs, over eighteen months. Each one reported an approach by a man matching Mr Parr.
Each one reported something taken. Denise still works in licensing. She never visits a site after dark, and she never takes a sealed bottle from a stranger. She keeps that photograph saved in three places. The word beside her name on the list, the one she did not recognise. It means replacement.
This story is fiction: names, places and events are invented.
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